Monday, December 5, 2011

fiction write lyrics


"You're My Better Half"
Car door slams, it's been a long day at work
I'm out on the freeway and I'm wondering if it's all worth
The price that I pay, sometimes it doesn't seem fair
I pull into the drive and you're standing there
And you look at me
And give me that come-here-baby smile
It's all gonna be alright
You take my hand
You pull me close and you hold me tight

[Chorus:]
It's the sweet love that you give to me
That makes me believe we can make it through anything
'Cause when it all comes down
And I'm feeling like I'll never last
I just lean on you 'cause baby
You're my better half

They say behind every man is a good woman
But I think that's a lie
'Cause when it comes to you I'd rather have you by my side
You don't know how much I count on you to help me
When I've given everything I got and I just feel like giving in
And you look at me
And give me that come-here-baby smile
It's all gonna be alright
You take my hand
Yeah you pull me close and you hold me tight

[REPEAT CHORUS]

Well, you take my hand
Yeah you pull me close and I understand

It's the sweet love that you give to me
That makes me believe that we can make it through anything

Oh baby, it's the sweet love that you give to me
That makes me believe we can make it through anything
'Cause when it all comes down
And I'm feeling like I'll never last
I just lean on you 'cause baby
You're my better half

Oh, oh baby you're my better half
Ooh, hey baby you're my better half

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

song analysis 2

“I'm In” by Keith Urban

In “I,m In” by Keith Urban he uses metaphor to say “its scary busisness,your heart and soul is on the line” which hes saying that your taking a chance by opening your heart to someone. The line “baby come on in the waters fine” describs how its risky opening your heart to someone. The tone would be happy and inlove. He says alot that “if I knew what I was doing id be doing it by now” which shows that he gets all choked up and tunge tied when hes around that certin girl. In the first verse he says “you give me this i”ll give you that” which shows that relationships are people making equal effort to stay together. The line “id be the best damn poet silver words out of my mouth” hes showing that hes willing to tell the girl that shes everything to him. Hes also says “take your time” which thats meaning that hes not rushing her into anything and that his love is real so he can wait for her and loves her enough for her to take her time. The line “why else would I be standing here so tounge tied ..which shows that hes nervous and choked up and dosnt know what to say around her but hes loves her enough to keep trying and sticking around. He also says “let me show you how good it could be” is showing how he wants to show her he wont hurt her and he'll treat her right and their relationship is going to better then she can ever imagine. The line “i'll be every breathe you can breath and i'll pour out everything I am” saying that he'll be everything she needs and more. “Theres no garentee when you feel this way” which is theres never gonna have to be anyone else in h her life besides him and when your so inlove you dont know what will happen.

Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Little Green by Joni Mitchell

in the song "Little Green" Joni Mitchell tells how she had a child at an early age which says in the lines "child with a child" and she also kinda says how your going have to make really hard decions in life but in the long run it will all work out.

Friday, October 7, 2011

The song “California King” Rihanna used in the first line “chest to chest nose to nose palm to palm” is a way of showing symbolic imagery of being close with someone “lips that felt just like the inside of a rose” shows the love that she shared with someone and that when their not around each other its like their 10 thousand miles apart.

Chest to chest Nose to nose Palm to palm We were always just that close Wrist to wrist Toe to toe Lips that felt just like the inside of a rose So how come when I reach out my finger It feels like more than distance between us
In this California king bed We're ten thousand miles apart I been california wishing on these stars For your heart for me My Californa king
Eye to eye Cheek to cheek Side by side You were sleeping next to me ---oohhh next to me Arm in arm Dusk to dawn With the curtains drawn And a little last night on these sheets So how come when I reach out my fingers It seems like more than distance between us ,In this California king bed We're ten thousand miles apart I been California wishing on the stars For your heart for me My Californa King
Just when I felt like giving up on us You turned around and gave me one last touch That made everything feel better And even then my eyes got wetter So confused, when I asked you if you love me But I don't wanna seem so weak Maybe I've been California dreaming
In this california king bed We're ten thousand miles apart I bet California wishing on these stars For your heart for me My Californa King My California King
In this california king bed We're ten thousand miles apart I been California wishing on these stars For your heart for me My California King